Wednesday, April 20, 2011

HW 21 A


因为张继的诗非常美和很有名, 所以渐渐成了一个大众化的东西. 结果,以前优美的诗已经变成了一个一般的东西, 这就是作者提到的讽刺.   

世界各地的观光区都有过分商业化的倾向是因为漂亮和有名的地方一定会对全国的人有很大的吸引. 因为有人多的地方很容易赚钱, 所以观光区不用说有过分商业化的倾向.  
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  1. 320K CourseApril 30, 2011 at 6:37 PM

    #1 优美的诗变成了一个一般的东西是一件不幸的事，但是不是一个讽刺 It is unfortunate, but not an irony. Read my annotation to find out why.

    #2 对！But you should have mentioned more about tourists' inclination to spend money.

    score: 40+45= 85 (If you decide to revise, revision must be done by May 6.)

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